Short Story

The Orphan of Arcoros

"To forge strength from ruin is the first lesson of Kodon."

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I. The Drowned Edge

The wind came first—cold and wet with brine, a knife running along the old bones of the shore. After the wind came the sea, and after the sea came the moment the world slipped and the boy fell through it.

Rongir Yur was five when Arcoros tried to swallow him. He remembered the grit in his teeth from the dune that overlooked the excavation site. He remembered the sensation of his mother's touch—warm, gentle—when she brushed hair from his eyes and told him to watch from the ridge and stay near the skim-craft. He remembered his father's bellow in the black mouth of the ruin as he called for the stabilizers. He remembered the way the sun cut the ruin into angles. And the sigil—he remembered the sigil more than anything: a shallow carving in the basalt, not quite a triangle, not quite an arrow, a geometry that begged the eye to solve it and never did.

In the shadow of a fractured cliff, where Arcoros permitted a sliver of its sunken plateau to emerge, the archaeological team made their camp. They could not have known this continent had once been called Qu—a name preserved only by those who kept the old knowledge. From their perch on this meagre outcropping, none could grasp the immensity of the lost landmass beneath the waves. But all understood the sea's constant threat: its spiralling waterspouts, hungry maelstroms, and sudden cyclones that could devour their work in moments. Their instruments promised safety from these environmental afflictions for perhaps two days. Still, they lived with bags packed and eyes on the horizon, ready to abandon everything at the first wrong breath of wind.

To the Gamaen surveyors, it was a myth-reef that shed artifacts when the currents turned sympathetic. A rare chance for scientists to uncover treasures from the planet's most mysterious and perilous region. To Rongir, it was a field of stones where his mother hummed to herself and his father measured light. He was never supposed to have accompanied them—this was no place for a child—but his designated caretaker had fallen ill, and the scarcity of opportunities to access this mystical place meant the expedition could not be postponed.

There was a tremor. Then the world paused, as if drawing in a breath, then shuddered again. The second tremor transformed the excavation's metal framework into a maw of jagged angles. His father's scaffold rattled against ancient stone, a discordant percussion. Voices cut through the chaos—one calling for the anchors, another remembering the child on the dune. Then came the sea, carrying the weight of old promises, surging forward to claim the shore with a single, decisive sweep.

Rongir didn't run at first. He watched the ruin's mouth tilt, watched the trestles fold inward as if a giant hand wanted the structure back. The skim-craft was gone, and with it any chance at escape. He watched the sigil—that near-triangle, that unsolved edge—catch a pulse of blue and answer the sea with a soft, implausible light. Only when he heard his mother scream his name did he move, and by then the earth had already decided to become a slope.

He didn't fall so much as slide down the dune, across the wet sand, into a crack that hadn't existed a heartbeat earlier. His world became a catalogue of impacts: shoulder, knee, forehead. His palms found algae. His chest found water. The crack filled. The sea muttered to itself through stone.

He learned a new rule under Arcoros: sound travels differently beneath fear. His mother's voice came thin and high from somewhere above. His father's voice came lower, like he was trying to bargain with the cliff. Then the ruin gave a sound he could never forget, a deep groan like a ship turning in its sleep, and the crack pinched, and the boy's world narrowed to water and dark and the need to move.

He started crawling without hesitation and kept crawling for a long time. Reflecting on it later, he had no idea how far he'd moved, only that it had taken its toll in scrapes and bruises. He found a place where the crack widened enough to let him turn and rise. The water fell away, the dark thinned, and he surfaced into a cavern with a broken roof and a ragged window of light. In that light, the sigil returned—not carved but reflected—trembling on the ceiling like a thought he had almost had. It was everywhere and nowhere, an outline that insisted on being inside his head.

He called desperately for his parents. Kept calling, pleading, crying. Only the sea answered.

Hours, or a whole lifetime, later, the storm ran out of anger, and the light outside decided it would forgive things by degrees. Rongir pulled himself onto a platform of broken slabs, wrapped himself in a torn thermal tarp, and watched the cave's mouth breathe. He did not sleep. He learned the sea's pattern instead—the count between waves, the signatures of their approach, the small high hiss at the end of each one like a secret being kept.

By the time the search drones came—a skein of silver gnats humming across the surf—he had begun to hate the sound of his own name in his head. It arrived attached to the faces of loved ones he could not reach. He would not allow that to happen again.

He was not entirely alone when they found him. The cave had voices the sea had left—low, almost like the two-deep murmur of adults talking in another room. Sometimes he heard words. Sometimes numbers. Once, once only, a voice that did not sound like any Gamaen he knew said in a language he shouldn't have understood: Remember the shape of the deep. It came at the same moment a beam of low light cut across the cave and woke the sigil on the ceiling so that it flashed once, insistent as a heartbeat.

His rescuers were warriors, not civilians. When they stepped down from their gunship, Rongir did not flinch. He had run out of flinching, and he had decided that if the sea wanted him, it could come take him properly. The first warrior through the cave mouth wore armour scoured by salt and patience, its black plates etched with thin lines of crimson and deep teal. The second held a staff with a modest emitter and an old grip. The third, who did not speak at first, carried nothing in his hands and everything in his stance.

"Life sign," the first said, visor searching the thermal shadows. "Small. There."

The third warrior set his helmet on his belt. His face was ordinary in the way a well-made tool is ordinary—unfussy, purposeful. He crouched to make his eyes level with the boy's, and the eyes were violet not by fashion but by birth, and full of a kind of weathered kindness Rongir would spend a lifetime trying to define.

"What is your name?" he asked quietly.

The boy considered the question with the seriousness he now carried like a limb. He did not immediately remember the word for himself. When it came, it felt issued by the cave.

"Rongir."

The warrior nodded, as if the boy had passed a test only he knew.

"I am Teylan Vor," he said. "Forge Chief of the Kodon Order." He tilted his helmet toward the cave mouth, toward the slow sea. "We came for the dead. We found the living. The universe prefers a story that swerves." He offered the smallest smile. "Can you stand?"

Rongir stood up slowly but assuredly. Had it not been for his trauma, he would be in awe of having just met the most legendary warriors in Gamaen civilization. Had it not been for his fatigue, he would have marvelled at the unlikely odds of anyone, but especially them, showing up to save him. He was just a little boy after all, one who'd known nothing but love, joy and kindness until the moment the sea swept it all away. His skin—cadet blue, sandy and salt-brined—shivered in the cave's breath. He was smaller than he felt. He watched the third warrior take off a cloak and wrap it around him without fuss or ceremony.

When they led him out, he turned once in the cave mouth. The reflected sigil, weak now in the quieter light, hung one breath and went. He did not know why the loss felt like a promise.

Outside, the ruin's scaffold had collapsed into a shape that meant nothing. Drones traced careful arcs around bodies that the sea had decided to return. The Kodon were not loud. The work had the pace of ritual, but not the pomp. The armour—charcoal black with crimson emblems and the faintest spiral of deep teal—looked like it understood both weight and water.

A young initiate approached Teylan and murmured. Teylan listened. He rubbed his thumb along the line of his jaw—a habit Rongir would later adopt without noticing.

"Commander," the initiate said louder, glancing at the boy, "Clause of the Sorrowed Ember?"

Teylan considered Rongir as if measuring him against the world and not finding him lacking.

"Yes," he said. "If he chooses it."

Rongir learned the clause later. Orphans of ruin may be taken by the Forge, not as charity, not as debt, but as iron to be worked. He did not have the words for it then. He had only the cloak and the feeling of the armour's warmth against his bare shoulder when Teylan lifted him into the gunship's ramp and the sea dropped away.

He slept for the first time since the world had tilted. In the dream, he was on the dune again, and the wind had teeth, and the sigil in the ruin was a light set into a deeper dark, and the sea said remember, remember, but when he woke he was on a bunk with a thermal blanket and the Kodon emblem carved into the bay's forward plate. It was a triangle—not perfect, never perfect—its angles soft as if smoothed by thumb and time. Deep in the etching, a bead of dull metal, a different alloy, caught his eye. Someone had set a fragment here and forged around it.

He reached out and touched it. It was warm.

"Better to be hammered than melted," Teylan said from the catwalk, like he was testing a proverb for fit. "Do you agree, Rongir?"

The boy nodded automatically, and then—because the clause required choosing—he nodded again, slower, from somewhere that had already decided.

II. The Forge of Becoming

The citadel at Kodon Ridge was a black thought set into a blue mountain. From the approach pass, it looked like a spine laid onto stone. From inside, it was air and echo and heat.

His quarters were spare—a narrow cot, a basin hewn from mountain stone, and a window no wider than his palm that revealed nothing but air and distant water threading silver down the cliff face. Each dawn brought a new ritual. First came clothing, black as forge-coal and unadorned. Next, sustenance: steaming broth, dense bread, and a drink whose warmth lingered long after the cup was empty. On the third day, when the mountain shadows still stretched long across his floor, Teylan himself appeared at the threshold, carrying two items in his weathered hands and wearing a question on his face.

The objects were a wooden practice blade—scuffed smooth by a thousand hands—and a triangular shard, gold but not gold, the colour of old promises. The question was simple and absolute.

"Do you wish to belong to the Order?"

Rongir did not ask where his parents were, even though he grieved for them deeply. He had understood the sea. He understood that bodies were a kind of weather, and weather changed. He did not ask about the shard. It felt wrong to ask before he had earned the right to understand.

"I do," he said, and it felt like it fit in his mouth like bread.

Teylan placed the practice blade in his palm. He placed the shard in the other.

"This was found among the wreckage of your camp," the Forge Chief said. "It is old. Older than our Order. We think our ancestors saw this shape and learned something from it. There are few like it. Keep it, if you want it. Melt it, if you choose it. Bury it. Return it to the sea. I do not care which. That choice is yours."

Rongir closed his fingers around the shard. The near-triangle, the not-quite arrow, bit his skin gently.

"What is it?" he asked.

"We do not know," Teylan said, and the answer struck the boy with more force than any claim of certainty could have. Adults in Rongir's world had always known. Teylan let truth stand on its own feet.

III. The Trial of the Twin Doctrine

Rain came early to the ridge that day, fine and mistlike at first, then hard enough to feel deliberate. It carried the scent of molten stone and sap, the perfume of the mountain's patience being tested.

The initiates gathered at the Promenade of Echoes—an open ring suspended above the white torrent that fell from Kodon Ridge's eastern throat. Dozens of narrow platforms, no wider than a man's stance, floated on magnetic hinges that swayed and corrected with every gust. The Kodon called it the moving ground. To fall from it was not to fail, but to be reminded the world owed you nothing stable.

Rongir stood barefoot on the nearest platform, the river's breath rising in thin sheets of mist. Across from him waited Jareth Torain, a head taller, older by two cycles, braids bound in crimson wire—the colour of fire, the colour of impatience.

The duel was a rite known as the Trial of the Twin Doctrine. Each initiate embodied one aspect of the Kodon mantra: Fire that strikes. Ocean that endures.

Teylan presided in silence. Jareth smirked. "I'll take the fire."

Rongir bowed slightly. He would not contest the inevitable.

"Begin," said Teylan.

Jareth moved first—fast and proud, a bright thing trying to be thunder. His strikes came in arcs that hissed through rain. He was stronger, but his rhythm was anger disguised as art.

Rongir's lungs burned as he met each strike with calculated poise, though fear and doubt crept through the shadows of his subconscious. Jareth's staff whistled death—a blow to the temple could kill, to the throat might crush. Each impact vibrated up Rongir's arms like lightning, wood cracking against wood, the sound sharp enough to split air. Pain bloomed where his defence failed: ribs screaming, shoulder joint wrenched backward, blood trickling warm down his forearm. Still, he retreated, each footstep precise on the rain-slick platform, the void of the falls roaring beneath. He tasted copper, felt his pulse hammering in his throat as he yielded ground deliberately—a predator's patience disguised as prey's fear—waiting for the moment when Jareth's rage would consume its master. The only question was whether he could deflect enough damage, play for enough time to outlast his opponent.

To the spectators, it looked like surrender. Rongir kept losing ground and gaining welts. To Teylan it looked like the tide drawing back, only to make its inescapable return.

"Hold your ground, Yur!" someone shouted.

Rongir stepped aside from another swing, letting Jareth's own momentum carry him past. The older boy twisted, overcommitted. The platform groaned. Rongir pivoted low and swept Jareth's legs clear off balance. He didn't land a blow; he redirected one.

Jareth stumbled, caught himself, and snarled. "You mock the forge, boy!"

"I listen," Rongir said. "You mistake the hammer's noise for its purpose."

Enraged, Jareth lunged again. Their staffs met, splintering. For a heartbeat, neither moved. Then the rain changed, heavier now, each droplet a bead of weight. The platforms slickened. The air trembled.

Another strike—wild, two-handed. Rongir turned his shoulder, felt the wind of it, and spun with the motion, staff sweeping low. Jareth went down hard, sliding toward the edge. His weapon fell into the river and vanished.

Gasps. Jareth, unarmed, tottered. Without thinking, Rongir dropped his own staff and caught his rival's wrist before the current claimed him. Their eyes met—one pair burning, one pair calm, the river reflected in both. He pulled Jareth back. They collapsed together on the trembling platform.

"Enough," said Teylan.

The duel was done. Rongir knelt, offering a bruised hand. Jareth stared at it as if it were an accusation.

"You fight like water," he spat. "Always hiding behind what moves for you."

Rongir's hand stayed steady. "When the flame is extinguished, the water remains."

Teylan approached. "Two elements, one lesson," he said. "Fire learns to strike. Water learns to wait. Balance is not stillness—it is choice." He looked at Rongir. "You saw what he could not: that some battles are not for winning straight away."

When the others departed, Teylan lingered. Teylan's eyes narrowed. "There was a moment—before you reached for him."

"My body knew before my mind did," Rongir said, studying his own palm as if the answer lay written there.

"Yes," Teylan said, voice dropping to match the rain's whisper. "True meaning moves through the world that way—without hesitation or thought."

A flash of lightning crossed the valley. For a breath—only a breath—Rongir thought he heard another voice woven within the thunder, deep and resonant: Remember the shape of the deep.

He looked up sharply, but Teylan said nothing. The rain had softened. The world was ordinary again.

That night, Rongir sat in the Hall of Silent Water. The duel replayed behind his eyes—Jareth's fury, the fall, the hand that had chosen mercy. He felt no victory, only gravity.

He laid his palm on the stone floor. "The sea spared me once," he whispered. "May it teach me twice."

The water beneath the floor pulsed once, as though in answer.

IV. The Origin

Years passed within the Forge's walls. Rongir grew into his strength quietly, like a mountain learning how to stand taller without moving.

He learned that fire's lesson was courage, but water's was truth. He learned that silence was heavier than sound. He learned that the forge did not create—it revealed.

On his seventeenth name day, Teylan brought him down from the ridge to the black-sand cove where the Order took its oaths. The sea was calm that day, almost curious. A portable forge burned against the wind.

Teylan set the golden shard from Arcoros on the anvil. "You've held this long enough," he said. "What will you make of it?"

Rongir studied the shard and the sea and remembered the duel, of Jareth's anger, of the voice that had once spoken in thunder. "Something that belongs to the living," he said.

"Better to be hammered than melted," said Teylan.

Rongir smiled. "Better to be hammered than melted," he echoed.

He laid the shard into the fire. It changed like a decision—first at the edges, then all at once. He drew it out, tapped, rotated, tapped again. He did not force a perfect triangle; he respected the metal's memory. When it cooled, it had become something new—three edges not equal, three angles not obedient, a small void in the center where light pooled.

Teylan watched. "What do you call it?"

"Origin."

"Then wear it," said Teylan, "and remember that what we forge is never finished."

He threaded a leather cord through the piece and knotted it three times, each loop a silent promise. As it settled against his collarbone, subtle heat radiated from the metal—not the lingering warmth of the forge, but something alive, pulsing in time with the blood beneath his skin.

V. Legacy

The day Rongir set the Origin into the Order's emblem plate, the mountain gave them a clear noon. He placed the piece beside the gold triangle, lifted the hammer, and struck—not the fragment, but the space around it. He taught the emblem to make room.

When it cooled, the old gold and the new alloy looked as if they had always shared the same center. Rongir pressed his palm to it. The old gold hummed with a familiar warmth while the new alloy pulsed with a cooler rhythm, like the tide drawing breath against shoreline stone.

"What you carry into the fight matters less than what you carry out," Teylan said.

"Better to be hammered than melted," Rongir replied with the adage.

"Sometimes," Teylan said, "but also better to bend than break."

The boy smiled with half his mouth, the half that still belonged to the sea.

He did not yet know he would become the hammer others braced against. He did not know Jareth would one day ignore a warning and walk into destruction. He did not know the voice in the thunder had been waiting all this time to speak his name again.

He knew only this: that metal changes; that water remembers; that strength is not the opposite of mercy; that the sea forgives nothing because it owes nothing.

Outside the forge room, the mountain took a breath so deep the sky had to step back. Down its long face, the river caught the noon and ran with it. Across the ocean, on the far side of everything, Arcoros kept its ruin and its whisper and its mystery.

And in the silence that followed the hammer's ring, the universe itself seemed to listen—as though the deep were remembering the boy it had spared. That boy had now become an unrelenting instrument of justice and the spear tip of his civilization's defence. One that was more formidable or wise than nearly any before him.

"The raging fire subsides, but the deep ocean calls."